Martin-Q9119262's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Takuto: Chapter 1]

Interesting...

...although I think it's closer to being a comic at this point. I realize it can be difficult to animate all the stuff at the same level of quality that you get from a focused sketch, so nobody should subtract your score for that. I have ideas of my own that look nice in single drawings, but that I can't imagine taking the time to animate. So, sympathy right there.

The only comments I have are that it would be a little nicer to have it so that when you press the space bar while the new text is coming up, it would speed up the text-appearing speed, or instantly show the text block; it was a little slow waiting for the dialogue to appear.

I wish you luck on your story, though!

MarkHansAvon responds:

Ah, thanks for the review Martin. =)

That's definitely an idea...I will have to try to integrate that 'skip text' feature. I don't think it should be TOO too hard when I think about it. I definitely am quite a beginner at actionscript, but I should be able to accomplish just that simple task.

[What All OldPeople Can Do]

Flexible.

Smoothly animated, GREAT SURPRISE (caught me off-guard for a big laugh), and the sound worked just fine for me. Short and sweet! 5/5 :D

DonkeysBazooka responds:

kick ass!